for lock-down online distance learning we had to a recipe for a cake, veggie soup, pizza, a sauce or wombat stew. I chose pizza, here is my writing. what do you think about my recipe tell me your feed back in the comments.
Wow sounds yum! I like how you have used sequencing words to inform the reader of what to do next. I would add pineapple to my pizza but it sounds delicious without it as well. Excellent work! Miss Hudson
Wow sounds yum! I like how you have used sequencing words to inform the reader of what to do next. I would add pineapple to my pizza but it sounds delicious without it as well.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work!
Miss Hudson
O0PS I deleted, meh, I don't care its old and forgotten
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